Tuesday, December 23, 2008

Intl Manga Awards? How about a /name/ ?

Thinking of some sort of dark and broody and definitely shrewed love story-

Here's an excerpt of one of my previous works... but I don't think it's good enough. feedback?

It was a trap- The so-called victim gladly agreed on this meeting so she could lay her trap- a trap that which sends her and a certain someone alone. as night fell, her plan went perfectly, she was brought in by who she sees as her loved one. tossing and turning on the bed, calling out to him as if sleep talking. piercing through his heart with sob stories of her past. Naming names, calling out, asking "why him". She tried her best to reach out and hopefully he would understand and take her- but alas, this man was not who she thinks.

Those words, it drove him mad- He didn't want any of this. He couldn't understand why this woman was so odd. how everything didn't seem right. This was a sort of psychological attack to him. He walks out but not entirely- he closed the door and gently opened it again. He caught her, she looked up to him and immediately pretended to sleep again.

Clever... he feels horrible, now that he feels that she played him into a trap. It actually was.

She wakes up and finds the man sitting across the room staring at her with cold eyes. An exchange of words, tears fell, and he left...

Truth is, he likes her, but with all these crazy things happening, he has his doubts.
Will they ever sort things out?

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Hmm... now that I think about it... I don't quite like it :/

11:54 AM
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